im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review. Lol its a good way to double task. It keeps thing easier and cleaned up a bit.

Plot)
Great plot. My favorite part was.

Nor lightning bolts bring freedom from her plight,
A witching stillness cast by dread anew,
I knew a girl once frozen by the light.

You did a good job writing it.

Grammer)
Great Grammer.

Format)
Great Format.

Keep up the good work and write on.

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