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 "Write an ode to your favorite fruit"  [E]
a WdC prompt
by M.M. Chief
Review by Charlie ~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello, M.M. Chief . My name is Charlie and I'm happy to welcome you to WDC today with a quick review. Feel free to email me if you have any site questions or need a hand finding your way around. *Thumbsup*

General thoughts. Yummm, now I want a peach. *Pthb* If I had written an ode for my favorite fruit, it would've been about strawberries, probably, but peaches are a good choice too. I love where these little prompts can take our minds.

That's cool. My favorite lines were: "Something this good/could never come free" I have no idea why, but that part cracked me up, like, the peaches are held on such a high pedestal or something. *Laugh* I mean, they're good, don't get me wrong... *Pthb*

"I want fuzzy peach skin/and peach juices all over me." Whoa now, you definitely like them more than I do.

Consider this. I thought this was a pretty good nonsensical poem. It has an ABCB rhyming pattern that gets a little muddled here and there. I thought the second to last line was a bit wordy to keep the flow going. It could use a little bit of an edit on the technical side.

The end. Overall, I thought this was a fun ode to peaches, and funny too. Thanks for sharing your poem with us!


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