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 We've all suffered our share  [E]
This reminds me that i will get through the big things.
by Carry Berry
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Flower4* *Smile* *Flower4* Hi Carry! I stumbled across you on "The Angel Wish List" . Wish granted! Thanks for sharing this piece of advice! *Smile*


*Reading*MY INITIAL THOUGHTS*Reading*

This is a heartfelt attempt at helping others get through the tough times. *Stary*

● Character(s):

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● Storyline/Plot:

Not so much a storyline as an article, this piece features sound advice. Good job!

● Dialogue:

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*Heart* MY FAVORITE PART(S):*Heart*

"Another thing I've done is let things take it's course. Sometimes, you can't solve something automatically, you have to let them just blow over. Things will definitley blow over.You shouldm't worry so much about the small things, that's only going to break you later." Well said. I keep with this philosophy myself. "Don't sweat the small stuff - and it's all small stuff!"


*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: *Idea*

Here are a few tweaks that might help:

● " they They were not easy, and definitley definitely took a lot of power, but now I'm happy, and ready to take on the world."

● "Why would you take advice from someone who can't even solve thier their own problems. question mark "

● " You shouldm n 't worry so much about the small things, that's only going to break you later."

● " I don't know if it's much help how much, but I think it'll help someone." Keeps "help" from being repetitive.

*Vine1*IN CLOSING: *Vine2*

Thank you again for sharing this piece. I think you are correct in it helping someone. I'm sure your readers will enjoy it as much as I did. *Smile*

Please don't be discouraged by my suggestions. We all need them in order to become better writers - and after all, isn't that why we're here? *Wink*

I think you're a very good writer, and I hope to read more from you soon. Keep up the good work, & Keep Writing! *Pencil*


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