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The Seed  [E]
Is this what you intended to happen?
by Beautiful Candy
Review of The Seed  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Beautiful Candy *Smile*

*Balloonr* Happy 15 WDC Anniversary my friend. !!*Balloonr*
How are you?.*Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose one of your friends and fans here in WDC and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftR* to you on this awesome WDC celebration.

The TITLE-
The first thing that did hook me while visiting your port-home and looking for something new to review is the given title of your piece.
Simple and one word but it creates a lot of meanings, and that hook me to find out.

Second the given imagery while looking at the given title.
Seed at first are tiny and small but they could grow and can be a big thing.

The BODY-
The way you crafted the words attracted me, the way how the lines are created gives an impact, it can help to stimulate the emotions of the piece.

Maybe, this is about a word or a promise that didn't fulfilled.
or a character or a deeds that at first its hard to understand but just only reach the meaning at the end.

I'm not good in detecting Grammar error, but for me the words that are used are perfect.

maybe, you can just only adjust the size of the letters, for a clearer reading.
That's the only thing that distract the flow while I am looking on it.

Over all, I can say that I like and love this piece of yours.
Until next reviewing again!, and always keep on smiling while stay on writing/reviewing.*Smile*

Regards
Samberine Sig.
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