Hi Elle - on hiatus

HAPPY WDC ANNIVERSARY!!!
I'm Samberine Everose one of your friends and fans here in Writing Dot com. and I'm here to give you a review as my to you this awesome WDC Anniversary.

I'm not an expert in reviewing, please forgive me if I do some mess.

The TITLE-
While I was flying with my little wings in your homefolio- to find something to review, it did catch my attention on the given title of your piece,specially the two words Colours and Palette which are really fit for their combination, we can really see different colours in a Palette,
and it seems very interesting to me.
Good Job! in attracting a reader.

The BODY-
My first impression is too long, but when I begin to read it, it just the words hold me, until suddenly I already there on the last stanza.
The word Grief there and its description keeps the reader (me) pulling of what the word Grief that whether we like it or not its one of the colours in our palette and it's true, our palette would be incomplete without any black or grey.
I can say you are good in describing here the colour of Grief.

I'm not an expert in Grammar so I will not give a comment about grammar.
But for me, i didn't find any word or line that distract the flow.

Until next reviewing, and keep smiling while stay in Writing and Reviewing.

Regards









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .