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I NEED A DIVORCE FROM U  [13+]
THE LETTER 'Q' COMPLAINS OF THE LOVELESS MARRIAGE
by Donkey Hoetay
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Donkey Hoetay *Smile*

*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


*BalloonR* HAPPY 15th WDC ANNIVERSAY! *BalloonR*
I'm Samberine Everose your little fairy friend here in WDC. *FairyL*
and I'm here to give you review as my *Giftr* to you on this awesome WDC Anniversary!.*ButterflyR*

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being one of the Newbies Showcased this September., that's where I found your portfolio. *Smile*

I'm not expert in reviewing, please forgive me if I do some mess.

The TITLE-
While I'm spreading my little wings into your beautiful home-folio, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review.
Well, I love and like poetry and this is the only poetry in your homefolio. *Smile*
The title seems to be interesting, frank, vulgar, comical, using the letter U, but more importantly this is most of today's main topic. Good job *ThumbsUpL* in attracting a reader.

The BODY-
My first impression is- too long, but when I begin to read it, the mood is light, yes its a comedy, and made me *Smile*.
Very clever in using letters Q and U to divorce..?*Bigsmile*

Over all, this piece is good, I liked it. Very Clever.
I'm not good in Grammar searching but I can say that I didn't find any words that can distract the flow.

Until next reviewing again, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

Regards,

Samberine Sig.
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