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Hi manishaagrawal, I found your piece on the random review page and thought I'd give it a look. I hope you'll find some of my suggestions useful!

*Burstp* What I liked:
*Bulletb* As a relatively frequent traveler, I think this was a good topic to explore. Also, I feel like you've covered many aspects of what to look for when calling a taxi.

*Reading* General things I noticed/specific suggestions:
*Bullet* "The car you are driving in" I feel like "driving" should be "riding", since you're not the one behind the wheel.

*Penr* Spelling/Grammar:
*Bulletr* make sure you capitalize the first letter of your sentence, even if this is just an informational article.
*Bulletr* "services", in "when you take a taxi services" should be "service", since you're only talking about one service.
*Bulletr* "they must be a to a great extremely competent driver." no need for the "a" here, and put a comma after "great".
         *Bulletv* I feel like "great" and "extremely competent" have the same meaning in this context.
*Bulletr* "Taxi Company" does not need capitalization.

Overall, this was an informational article and I thought it was a good read. Thank you for sharing, and keep writing!

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