Hi A Michelle feeling alive again , I found this piece on the random review page and thought I'd give it a look. I hope you'll find some of my suggestions useful!

What I liked:
This was a very cute story. I enjoyed reading about Marissa. Your story really reminded me of when my mom would bake cookies, and my sister and I would impatiently wait for them to cool down enough

General things I noticed/specific suggestions:
maybe add "dough" after "uncooked", just for specification.

Spelling/Grammar:
"Honey" doesn't need capitalizing.
Put hyphens in "four year old": "four-year-old".

Overall, I loved your story. It was cute and sweet, and your ending made me smile. Thank you for sharing, and keep writing!

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