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 A Really Lousy Poem  [13+]
An intentionally bad poem. Wrote this in 5 minutes. You won't believe it took me that long
by Dad
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Poseyv*Item Title: A Really Lousy Poem

*Poseyp*Author: Dad

*Poseyb*Type of writing: Poetry

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello Dad, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I'm going to give you a detailed review today in order to aid you in becoming a better writer. "Beauty is in our Words"
This is a clever and amusing little ditty, I do hope it is a joke lol
and you really didn't get ex ed over being sex ed lol.
I like intentionally bad poetry, do you know they actually have a contest for it here at WDC?

*Poseyb*excerpt from writing:
she carried a grudge-L
that she wielded like a cudgel


*Poseyv*suggestions:
In the above excerpt I don't understand what you mean?
I know what grudge is but what does the "-L" stand for
and what does "cudgel mean" please forgive my ignorance but I am at a loss.


*Poseyp*conclusion:

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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