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 | I used to ask Mama  [E] I wrote about me and my mom about a conversation that I thought we should have.  |
| (5.0)  "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"        THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!  Item Title: I used to ask moma Author: Faith Jones Type of writing: LyricsReviewed by:  Lisa Noe First Impression: Hello Faith Jones, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I'm going to give you a detailed review today in order to aid you in becoming a better writer. "Beauty is in our Words"These are beautiful and heartfelt and meaningful lyrics. I think the moral of your song is very important. the last verse is my favorite part of your song, I like it because I think it is very important to say that looks are not what counts, a person's inner self is what counts that is an important moral. excerpt from writing:"The outside doesn't matter It's the inside that counts If you want the man of your dreams You gotta think past the outer shell And always look to the inside." suggestions:The chorus is very nice I enjoyed the entire song. I am curious what type of beat it would have to it though.conclusion:thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You. 
  Lisa Ann Noe ~~Image #4000 Sharing Restricted~~  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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