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 "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"        THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!  Item Title: The Thorn and the Rose Author: Alan Philips Type of writing: poetryReviewed by:  Lisa Noe First Impression: Hello Alan Philips, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I'm going to give you a detailed review today in order to aid you in becoming a better writer. "Beauty is in our Words"This is a beautiful poem I think you did a great job writing it. It has a very good and appropriate title, The item description is well done, I think it is listed under the other genre which is a good place for it. The poem is structured using four stanzas of six lines each. and has good rhymes. the following is my favorite stanza because i like that it hides its tears. excerpt from writing: By thorn allowed as days grow long, the rose takes centre stage. At end of year, it hides its tears, when views its empty cage. suggestions:I saw no mistakes, you did a good job writing this item. conclusion:thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You. 
  Lisa Ann Noe ~~Image #4000 Sharing Restricted~~  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/06/2015 @ 5:19pm EDT