Hello! I saw your poem on Review Requests and was interested. There has been a lot of grim stories and poems on here of late but I suppose it is to be expected. This poem was written well and I only have a couple of suggestions. All your stanzas start with the first line "Dear Sunday, _____ Sunday, save for the second. Although it's not that big of a deal it messes with the flow a little. I did like this poem though, I suppose that is the only suggestion or comment I have. Good job and Write On!