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Hello! I found this piece on Review Requests. It is such a cute piece and a wonderful nod to the Wizard of Oz. How odd this poor soul gets sent the ruby slippers and then sent to Kansas by a mistake they made. It was a wonder piece though and the only part that made my mind stumble a bit was the last line. To me, it didn't flow as well as the others. Good job and Write On!
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