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 New Day  [E]
She ran into the forest, as the dawn shattered the night...
by waterlilly
Review of New Day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello! I found this on Review Requests and it is a great piece. I could vividly see this girl running, watching as the trees dropped their leaves for her and as she ran they flew up behind her. I found nothing wrong with this and your imagery is quiet amazing. You should enter this in a contest perhaps? Just a thought. Great job and Write On!
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