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 Job hunting explained   [E]
This short guide is to help the unemployed find meaningful employment.
by Dazza
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Thank you for sharing this.
*Star* I liked how you made this a step-by-step paper. Organized, and well written. You also provided examples of "What to do" and "What not to do". Very detailed in your descriptions of the different points you made in your paper.
*Star* I saw no grammatical issues or typos in this paper to detract or distract from what you were trying to point out.
*Star* Very good advice, such as "Don't speak negatively about your former employers. This could cost you a job". An excellent example. Also, about writing out your references, rather than just saying "available upon request". I remember being taught to write available upon request. Just doing it saves the potential employer time and effort.
*Star* I also liked how you ended your paper with advice on reading another one of your works "How to win at a job interview". A clever way to gain more readership.
*Star* Overall, a great paper. You did an excellent job, and this will be a great resource for people trying to get their resumes out into the work force.
Keep up the great job!

sincerely,
amy

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