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 Tension  [E]
Struggles
by Rose Scott
Review of Tension  
Review by Olivia
Rated: E | (3.5)
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Dear Rose Scott: Your poem drew me in and it flowed, just the way I like poetry to flow. It held my interest and it picked up speed as it became obvious how much anger you held inside; but I felt the impact when you said hatred. To increase the intensity, those two words were capitalized! That resonated with me and I had to work through those feelings a few times in my life. What I found out was that those emotions were killing me; not the hated!

Thank you, your poem took me back to those times and I am glad the hated no longer phase me.
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