Greetings, Jatog the Green ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" !

Prompt: Your piece (poem or story) must begin with the following phrase:

He reared, hooves piercing the sky...

I enjoyed your visuals. Very nice! You know how to show vs. telling.

Your flow is always amazing! And your poetry is lovely, to say the least.

I loved the line:
a bolt of strength and power and potential.
I was expecting to read a bolt of lightning but you gave this reader so much more!

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

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