Greetings, Jacky ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" !

Prompt: Your piece (poem or story) must begin with the following phrase:

He reared, hooves piercing the sky...

You are so clever, Jacky, lol. This made me smile. What a fun twist! I like what you did with the prompt. Clever, indeed!

I loved how you ended this, too, admitting to embellishment. And then that last three word sentence: So sue me. Quite an enjoyable read!

I loved the lines:
He reared, hooves piercing the sky… OK, not hooves exactly, steel toe safety shoes. And he didn’t exactly “rear” so much as jump up so fast that the chair flipped over backwards with him still in it, causing his “hooves” to pierce the sky.
This hooked me right away!

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

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