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 Grace Unto Thee  [E]
I meet a man who knows how to turn a phrase.
by Jatog the Green
Review of Grace Unto Thee  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Leafbr* Greetings, Jatog the Green ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week!

Shaara's Prompt: Eureka, Fascinating, Radical, Cool . . . these are examples of expressions that denote awe, amazement, appreciation.
         Your task today is to write a poem or story that uses fresh expressions to display admiration. (At least TWO different ones, please.)


*Reading* Nice work! And I do appreciate the refreshing explanations at the bottom of the page. *Wink* *Bigsmile*

*ThumbsUpL* I loved these lines:

Then he who looked as if he swallowed birds,
said, “Let me rearrange a few more words.

[I loved the visual of someone looking as if he had swallowed birds, lol. I never heard that before, but it's perfect!)

*Pumpkin* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*LeafY*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *LeafY*


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