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 Declaration of Love  [ASR]
Four children loved their mother. But they admired her more. So did everyone else there.
by PureSciFi
Review by Cubby
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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*Leafbr* Greetings, PureSciFi ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week!

Shaara's Prompt: Eureka, Fascinating, Radical, Cool . . . these are examples of expressions that denote awe, amazement, appreciation.
         Your task today is to write a poem or story that uses fresh expressions to display admiration. (At least TWO different ones, please.)


*Reading* That was nice how you had the family and others speak at Viviana's funeral.

*ThumbsUpL* I loved the lines:
Once it ended all the chairs turned to face a large wall. Which turned into a large screen. They all watched as Viviania’s Death Chamber slid off the platform threw a tube. A few seconds later everyone could see a Death Chamber shooting out of the spaceship.
[Interesting visual!]

*Pumpkin* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*LeafY*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *LeafY*


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