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 The Trouble With Listening  [E]
When I try to "just listen . . ."
by Dan Sturn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-12-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

I thought this was going to be about listening.
When in fact it is about getting your reader to listen.
That is the feeling I get from this piece.

Done in a form that is consistent and easy to follow.
Flowing gently from one point to the next, greatly enhanced by a grammatically pristine piece of work.
Pace is slow as the reader listens to the thoughts you are creating.
This reader would not recommend a single change. All is said with such grace.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SherriG by reviewing for her
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