Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-12-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

"He who has an ear, let him hear."
"Listen to me!"
"I'm listening."

It's all about listening and truly hearing what another is saying or writing.
Your piece says a lot and the reader is walked along on the journey.
Emotionally: the admontion to listen shines through.
Flowing at an easy gait,
Your poem is light and full of substance.
Paced at a slow stroll, the reader is left to decide what he/she hears from this piece.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed at all.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SherriG by reviewing for her group
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