Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-12-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A touching elegy.
I know she often battled illness and prayers were sent up for her recovery, in the end we lost her and the light in the WdC is a little dimmer for it.
The reader can feel the emotion that comes from the heart.
the rhyme scheme gives this piece a sense of a song being sung in honor of SerriG.
The flow is so smooth, as if it is from a seasoned writer who knows how to craft his message well.
The pace is slow and methodical. Filled with much love and respect for oen who meant so much to the writer in the WdC.
Grammatically your piece is pristine.
Nary a jot nor tittle, would this writer suggest improving upon.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SherriG by reviewing for her.
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