Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-12-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Out of the mouths of babes.
Encouraged by your explaination of the sirens coming closer to the neighborhood.
This is such a real scene.
The characters are alive and ticking.
Now that's imagery that works.
Form and structure are appropriate.
Flow is smooth and sensory filled.
Pace is slow as the matter is presented.
Grammatically you are okay and no suggestions for improvement need to be made.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SherriG by reviewing for her.
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