Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-12-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A gripping tale of survival and God's provision along the way.
The end begs for more of the story to be told. Is this a first chapter or is it a complete piece?
There is genuine emotion within and the reader is gripped with the urgency.
Form is solid.
Flow is smooth.
Grammatically speaking, your piece is a masterful creation.
No suggestions of improvement are necessary today.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SherriG by reviewing for her group
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