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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello there, kk
This is a Simply Positive Review! *StarB*

*Owl2* I am also judging your item for "The Bard's Hall Contest"  Thanks for entering!

*Bats* I enjoyed the creepiness surrounding the scene of old iron gates at an entrance to a place of final sleep.

*Grave* I could picture the owl, the nightfall and the gravestones, with words describing a brief piece of one's life, carved upon them for family and visitors to read. Yet, when they describe in a blunt way, the cause of a death -- it makes it all the more creepy. I have seen some pretty weird messages carved in stone grave markers.

Observation:

"The angles hide their face" [angels]

*Tools* There was no line count included, which lost you some points.

*Skull* Otherwise, fine rhythm and rhyme, with all the chills that waft in the night air, and spirits whispering from beyond, "Something Horror This Way Comes!"

Well done! *Tea*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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