What a beautiful poem you sent me to review. I am so glad you did. Upon reading this the first time, my muddled brain had trouble deciphering the anachronism of it all. I had to first go look up the word to make sure I was thinking straight. After realization set in the poem took on a life of its own and the beauty of it shined through.

I found myself relating on a personal level with this poem and it touch a heart string. I stopped after the third read through and just sat here staring off into space with the image of rainbows in the distance as the rainbows represented the world I should be living in and the room around me the reality of the day.

I have often found myself thinking I should have been born in another era, another time and to me that is what this poem is about. The beauty of nature is the voice of the poem and the industrial world with the electric tools of fall encroaching with their loud noise are what shows that the trees and foliage are from a more tranquil and peaceful time.

To me the colored or color highlighted words helped to represent the rainbow and seeing the beauty of it all. I felt this was a well written poem that motivated and sparked great imagery. It brought me to contemplate the day and whether or not I stopped and took time to simply enjoy the moment and what was around me. Thank you for sending me this beautiful and artistic poetry.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .