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Given: Nov 21, 2015 at 3:51pm
Length: 465 Characters |
398 w/o WritingML
An emotional separation displayed well in this short story. The flow is good with emotionally packed words, the story is told in a simple way but keeping the mysterious part intact. The simple act of confident move hurts more than the fight , abusing words prior to separation. The deserted house with the all loving memories are depicted well.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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