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*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


What brought COWntessa Beefaroni a.k.a. hooves here to graze and read in your port?

*Cow*You sent me a very nice review, so here I am to visit you and read your story and send you a nice review, too. I also want to welcome you to the site as I see you are pretty new here! Welcome aboard!

What Does hooves think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*As I was reading I thought that Mr. Randall was so judgmental about the people he was seeing every day. He seemed to spend a lot of time focusing on others and not on his own work and business.

If he had maybe kept his opinions to himself and put his energy into doing positive stuff he would be on the right track. Sounds like he was so obsessed he couldn't even read his email which would have notified him of what was going on.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I liked the ending and that by revealing how he felt about the guy outside, Mr. Randall revealed more about himself to everyone, most especially the Dean, Mr. Hoffman.

The title is very well chosen also as it applies to the obvious promotion Mr. Randall wanted and then to the fact that Mr. Randall missed the point in what he was witnessing, jumping to conclusions and exhibiting prejudicial and judgmental behaviors that were unseemly anywhere, let alone a college campus where people are supposed to be open to learning about the world.

Fine story! I see nothing to suggest for improvement and no errors to point to - great work!

I also wanted to mention this to you. You write very well and you might enjoy "The Writer's Cramp"  as it is a daily prompt driven contest. It is a great place to write from prompts and to meet other writers on the site. It is reliable and runs every day and I get a lot of my favorite reading there at times.

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HOOVES, a.k.a. tHiNg, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

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I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am trying to encourage you to write more as that is my goal. Enjoy yourself on the site is my motto!

*Sun**Tulipp*


Ta Ta until we meet again....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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