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Taken  [13+]
Writer's Cramp entry~poem about my dad
by Jen~
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Review by Cubby
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Leafbr* Greetings, Jen~ ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" !

Shaara's Prompt: She died too early.

*Reading* Oh, Jen! *Hug* What a difficult piece to write at this sad time for you... *Heart*

*BareTree* Spoken from the heart...

*ThumbsUpL* I loved the lines:
Her heart is now racing, yet life is still
Shock has taken over, as it now will

*Pumpkin* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*LeafY*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *LeafY*

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