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 No synonyms for memories  [13+]
Inspired by a rough year
by zebrasandcoffee
Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*BalloonR**ConfettiP*HI I am here with a review to celebrate you on your anniversary *Star*

I was intrigued by your evocative title. Great choice that made me ponder. *Salute*

I enjoyed the picture you vividly paint here. I could perceive the underlying atmosphere and it was great to read. The short phrasings and the repeated words really added drama and effect. Wonderful strategy. eg. The first lines struck me as soon as you said, "stare. Stare at.." *Wink*

The last line has potency in its concept and wrapping up your reflective moment.

It does not look like a poem on the page yet has the flow and feel of a poem. Arrangement can be free choice in poetry too especially as this is a freer style. It worked for me. *Smile*

Thanks for sharing your vision and vibe. I liked entering into the revery!*Starstruck*


Light on the path as you write on!!*Star*

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