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Ayla Marie

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This is a very passionate piece that is a special message between two who had a strong emotional tie. This is the end of a relationship, of one voice saying goodbye to the other.

Though this was written as a short piece, a paragraph, I can easily see it as a song. The message is clear and easy to understand, it is the song of love lost and yet, it goes on. I see an easy refrain and more details jumping off of the paper each time I read this.

To me the emotions evoked here are strong and sincere. This is a sad piece and yet, I couldn't help but to keep reading it over and over. This is well written. Great job.

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