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Review #4177264
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 The Ghost House  [13+]
My homage to Richard Laymon
by Pennywise
Review of The Ghost House  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Pennywise !



*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


What brought hooves/COWntessa Beefaroni meandering over to your port?

*Cow* Today is your account birthday and I wanted to wish you a very happy ten year celebration! I hope this will generate some sort of note to you and you will return to the site.

What Does hooves think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*What an involved, twisted tale of being trapped in a time warp of horror. I like the way you weave the story through the eyes of the boys as they discover that there is no getting out of there.

A couple of your ending rhymes (like "yella" and fixture") didn't quite do it for me, but most were great - it was just a few times I wasn't sure you got there with your rhyming, but that is a very hard thing to do. I am not sure if I could do better with a story this involved and detailed. It took a lot of imagination to tell a story with rhyme and make it make sense all the way through.

You definitely have a knack for the rhyming storytelling that draws the reader into the story and I was hanging on every word as it progressed.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*This was my favorite part:

"Now from downstairs came a softer sound, a munching & crunching.
“My mind shouted at me, good God, the beast is lunching."

How horribly scary! I love it as it gave me the chills and I imagined a nightmare scenario of my own. Wonderful poetic tale telling you have here!

Bravo!

COWntessas Beefaroni, a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

*Thumbsupr**Cow**Thumbsupl*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. Keep writing and creating, whatever you do!

*Sun**Tulipp*


Ta Ta until we meet again....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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