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The Lone Traveler - Part Eleven  [13+]
A young farm girl undertakes a fantastic and perilous journey in a Medieval like world.
by Oldwarrior
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The Lone Traveler - Part Eleven  (13+)
A young farm girl undertakes a fantastic and perilous journey in a Medieval like world.
#2068051 by Oldwarrior


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As enemies face off, a peace treaty is enacted as Dragon riders with Tertius come to find common ground. It is amazing how one person can make a difference. Many do not accept that truth or even have an inkling of belief it is possible, and yet it is. It takes one person to start the avalanche of change and it can snowball from there. Analia is the snowflake that begins the downward roll, gathering momentum as she helps to council the two sides.

Mysticism and surprise arise as an old legend is introduced into the storyline. We learn of Analia's true identity and the change that is to be brought about through her though the details are obscure, we know it will take place.

Another great chapter full of adventure and mystery as the story continues to surprise and awe around every corner. Well written, this has a captive audience and I had to read several chapters before I could stop and review, so I am going back to do so now.



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