standalone [13+] The loose fragments from years of random thoughts. |
This is a review from "Invalid Item" Alright, Mr. Norberino... I decided on a whim to do Minja's review thing this month. Because I'm crazy or something (but of course, that was determined a long long time ago I think). So, I feel like reviewing, but I'm also ummm... let's just say not at all sober. That sort of limits the options for what I can really review. Heavy analysis and all of that? Not so much. Reviewing someone easily offended? Also not so much. Then I landed on the perfect thing! You have like a zillion folders packed full of poetry and amazing Norb-like musings that I feel very confident giving my seal of approval. So... done deal. I was actually just digging through all of these folders a week or so ago. I did read a few of these, but tonight, "The Day the Stars Became Round" caught my eye. Awesome title, bro. I also really love the content too. "Liquor soaked, sleeping pill-choked" ...sounds like something I would have written at various points. I really dig the whole thing. I envy your ability to toss rhymes around all willy nilly too. I'm miserably bad at that. Once in a while, one creeps into my poetry, but more often than not, it just... doesn't. You also play with rhythms in an even more blatant way than I do. Like, that seems to be a common part of your writing style. I dig it. It reminds me of beat poets, and who the heck doesn't love a good beatnik? I've got to say that I'm pretty intrigued about reading the early Writer's Cramp entries too. You mentioned them a few times, so my interest is piqued enough to come give them a look at some point soon. So anyway, what I've read here has been good! Off to poke around some more! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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