Review number # 2 of week Jan.28-Feb. 3

Hi Carly,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title What I Have Come To Understand:

First Impression: How easily the poem flowed for this prompt.

What I liked: Our muses smile, I agree they did seem to throughout the challenge. It was so good to see you writing everyday, I have missed that immensely. I hope you continue.

What needs your attention:Nothing, it rocks as it is.

Favorite Parts: Deriving inspiration from the required word and then feeling pain having to remove the forbidden words. I felt the same way, and but I did notice as you did some of pieces were actually much better once I did.

Overall Impression: You are a very talented writer and this contest allowed you the opportunity to shine.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .