Review number # 3 of week Jan.28-Feb. 3

Hi Denise,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: My Last 30 Days

First Impression: Interesting insight into Denise, I am glad you did not give up. You did an awesome job.

What I liked: Brain cells burned to a crisp, what a great lead into the stanza and the conclusion success.

What needs your attention: Not a thing, it flowed smoothly and fulfilled the prompt.

Favorite Parts: Success in the future, I believe it is possible for you Denise, you are stronger than you think.

Overall Impression: I found that you addressed the prompt with a very insightful look into you and your delight accomplishing the goal. Good job!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .