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Review number #6 of week Jan 28-Feb 3rd

Hi Loswordsmith

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Simply Happy

First Impression: Beautiful imagery from beginning to end in this look into what makes this author happy.

What I liked: A granddaughter's smile connected with me, I have 4 myself 19,16, 3 and almost 3. I have 3 grandsons 11,10 and 7. When they are here nothing else matters to me either,

What needs your attention: Nothing, the prompt was fulfilled and more.

Favorite Parts: I chuckled when I came to coffee, nectar of the God's. Amen! I love the aroma, the taste and I cannot imagine a day without it.

Overall Impression: A very enjoyable read, thank you for sharing what makes you happy with us.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my immense pleasure!
Lyn



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