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 Moving in with Our New Stepmother  [ASR]
Forand has a conversation with Orain and Kainda on the way to their new stepmothers house.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Snow3* Greetings, PureSciFi ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week!

Shaara's Prompt: Getting a stepparent can be tough on a kid.
There’s a stranger in the house scenario,
plus the fact that any liking for this new person
could be interpreted as disloyalty to the biological parent.
Write about one very new relationship
between a stepfather/mother and stepchild.

Please, NO dark clouds due to impropriety
(stated with old-fashioned terminology,
but you know what I mean.)
Poem or story.

*Reading* Good job following the prompt!

*Snow1* Interesting read. Enjoyed the dialogue. *Smile*

*Starb* I liked the line:
“You have heard about how evil stepmothers can be,” said Kainda. “Aren’t all stepmothers like that?” I wonder if this thought began with the Cinderella story?

*Snow4* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Snow1*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Snow1*


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