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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Snow3* Greetings, TwoShoes ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp!

Shaara's Prompt: Getting a stepparent can be tough on a kid.
There’s a stranger in the house scenario,
plus the fact that any liking for this new person
could be interpreted as disloyalty to the biological parent.
Write about one very new relationship
between a stepfather/mother and stepchild.

Please, NO dark clouds due to impropriety
(stated with old-fashioned terminology,
but you know what I mean.)
Poem or story.

*Reading* Nice work expressing the feelings from the step-mom's POV. *Smile*

*Starb* The following lines stuck with me:
I look down at my boyfriend’s baby.
She probably is going to hate me.


*Snow4* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Snow1*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Snow1*


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