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Review 1 of 6 for week ending 2/3

Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!
If you had allowed for stars I would have given 5 of 5!

TITLE: I chose to read this poem based purely upon its title. Though, in my mind I disagree with your premise, I think this is a well thought out, well written piece. I have read several of your pieces and I have been impressed by all of them.

THEME: Your theme is one of fate guides our lives vs a higher being.

TONE: Your tone is narrative and a bit cynical (as I read this)

PACE: Your word structure and choice tends to make this piece with a quick pace

FLOW: Your flow is wonderful throughout allowing the reader to easily follow from beginning to end.

FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE: I love your references to how those of us with faith amble through life. Crying to one who may or may not be there. Relying on a hope we may never know. With death finally ending it for us

SPELLING/GRAMMAR: I found no errors in any of these areas

AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: I found nothing to improve within this poem.

EXCELLENT WRITING EXAMPLES: I especially loved the reference to the raven.

Excellent work, as always

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