Hey, Dana! How are you doing? Your WDC anniversary is coming up tomorrow, so I thought I'd leave a quick review on something of yours that WASN'T your blog. We bloggers get so caught up in blogging that we forget the other bloggers have anything other than a blog. There were way too many variations of 'blog' in that sentence. Anyway, I hope this review finds you well! Chat soon.

I chose this micro horror story because I liked the description of a normal day at the mall turning into a nightmare. I wasn't sure how you were going to work that out with 100 words, but I was excited to see. I think the idea behind this works perfectly because carousels are just creepy. Everyone knows that, right? We used to have a little town festival near where I lived growing up every fall and they had this old, rusty carousel that totally freaked me out. The eyes on the horses went in two totally different directions and there were a ton of other errors in their construction that only added to the creepiness. My parents always tried to get me to go on the carousel and I would scream until they stopped trying to force me.

I think you did a good job of introducing the idea of the story and wrapped it up well in the ending with so few words. Impressive! The only issue I noticed was a couple grammar things. I thought there should be a comma before 'Mama' because she's being spoken to directly and I thought "rent a guard" needed hyphens: rent-a-guard.

Other than that, it was an interesting quick shot story. Thanks for sharing with us!



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .