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Hello there, Paul D
This is a Simply Positive Review!*Hourglass*

I am also reviewing your item as a judge for the "The Bard's Hall Contest" . Thanks for entering our first "Lyrics Only" contest prompt. *Tackr*

*Vinyl* I enjoyed your melody in my mind. I could picture a galaxy of emotions bursting forth. You capture a science fiction escape from reality and bring it into motion with well woven words and the ability to hear an orchestra playing a very haunting type of melody. Yes, I really did picture an orchestra behind the voice of the singer of these lyrics.

That's pretty cool! *WitchHat*


Observation:

"knowing what come[s] next is not my choice."

Music brought to life within the lines -- yes, the verses are quite lyrical. *Lightning3*

Well done! *Tie1*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



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