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 Review #4193510 |
 | Dear Thalia  [E] My entry 16 lines. A letter condemning Thalia for causing me to create!  |
| (4.0)| Hiya Pandapaws! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! this letter popped up on the Random Read page!   I envision Thalia as a muse of yours or a friend and it is a unique concept to thank by condemning her for her magic.  The line "sorry for me...enjoy.." shows well the contrary pulls.  It is fun to read your poem as it speaks to Thalia. It has a lovely rhyme and I liked how you show the wandering --distracted by the seasons, mice, scents -all of which the muse calls you to notice instead of the "other things" that have less appeal. You make it seem like you'd rather not be at her mercy and yet NOT! LOL The freer structure suits the theme and the varying line lengths give me the impression of the flowing around of the musing mind. I did wonder at the scheme of rhyme as you have three lines that rhyme in the middle. It did not take away from the read and maybe you did not write with a structure in mind. The punctuation was well done and assisted the read as well. Thanks for this amusing peek at your relationship with Thalia--- Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/03/2016 @ 2:35pm EST