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| (4.5)| Hiya C.E. Thieroff! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! This animal poem popped up on the Random Reads. I like cats so I couldn't pass it by.  The title is appealing with it's familiar "Oh to be.."! Great way to set the tone of the poem with a wish and affirms the respect and admiration of the feline. The first verse is chorus like!  It was fun to read with vivid descriptions and engaging soundscape and rhymes. The verses were not strictly patterned, yet I was not thrown out off as I read aloud. The variety of line length and flow added to the drama. eg. the abrupt sounds like "disguised" and "caught" slow the pace where in other places it flows quicker. Nice! The one line that felt off was the first in the last verse as it seemed long and slow. I loved "quick as light..paw" and the turns of phrase like "black of spot"! The vocab in the last line is interesting too! The bit of personification as you speak as the cat is well done too. In the first verse you wish to be and then it happens... with "that's me". Cool.   Thanks for sharing this entertaining tribute to the ocelot! I enjoyed the magical wish! Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/19/2016 @ 11:47am EST