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 PITTER PATTER RAINDROPS.  [E]
After years of drought, will the rains ever come.
by Meg
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Meg
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Turtle1*

I am also reviewing this item as a judge for the Bard's Hall Contest. Thank you for entering!*ScallopO*

*Apple* I was drawn into the look and feel and the urgency, of a water starved land, and its people waiting and praying for the rains to quench its thirst. I know, having lived in California during its driest times, just how glorious it is when after years of drought, the rains let loose. The problem is, the land is sometimes so dry, the water just rolls off the concrete-like sand, causing flooding problems for those downhill.

*Music2* Your song reads like a ballad and I could picture it sung to guitar strumming in the background.

*Tea* You a fine job with the Lyrics Only prompt, and your lyrics have an originality that I enjoyed. It is written by one who is relating a life's experience and the hardship that can come from lack of rain in a region.

Good job! *CountryAU*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch




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