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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello there, Andy~hating university
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Piano*


*PointRight* I am also reviewing this item, as a judge for the Bard's Hall Contest. Thank you for entering our Lyrics Only, prompt, month!


*Hotair2* I can really appreciate all the work and thought that went into this ballad about gods and how the changing season's myth began.


*Owl2* I enjoyed the gods versus the resistance from Hades. How the gods were brought to life and we are shown their strengths and weaknesses.


*Mustache* Well woven lyrics with a vivid picture being painted in a reader's mind's eye.

*Gavel* My personal preference? I would have liked to see these lyrics alone, without the aid or mention of an already known holiday tune, "God Rest ye Merry Gentlemen," to keep the flavor of the lyrics original to its "own" musical notes -- which did not have to be included in the contest, of course. *Wink*

Otherwise, well done on the lyrics themselves! *CoffeeT*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch




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