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Hello Monty This is a charming little romantic poem that made me smile. I love how you use colour in the first stanza. You use rhyme to excellent effect too. The rhymes coupled with the regular syllables in the lines ensure the poem flows smoothly and I think it would be a great piece to read aloud. It's difficult to write about love without being clichéd but you avoid that trap here and there's a freshness to the poem that makes it seem very authentic. I very much enjoyed reading this. Best wishes, Mark ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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