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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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WOW This is some poem. pardon typing, in cast.

This is amazing. First, the last verse didn't seem to fit with the rest. The first part sounded more ancient, out of a different time. The last verse just sounded too modern.

Now for the rest. lol

The poem was suitably dark, scary and demonic sounding. You did well on the meter and rhyme. You drew me in and held my attention.
Well done!
Thanks for sharing.
Love, LinnAnn

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