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Hi Dave,

I was looking for something short to review so I decided to review this hat I found in the SCREAMS!!! forum.

I liked this story. It reminded me of King's Thinner where a guy is cursed and loses a lot of weight so fast. So in this story, the man is going to be 14 inches. The idea of knowing he is going to be so tiny and probably die is extremely scary.

I noticed a few commas missing in dialogues. I'm sure you'll be able to spot that.

Overall, it was short and scary piece. I liked that. Write on!

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